Great story!
I like the story so far although I must say...it jumps at times and creates confusion between chapters. They don't seem to connect smoothly or at least the transition is hard to catch..... but then again that might have been your original intention.

Hour is a fun figure to read on.... almost the complete opposite of Neuro you could say. I wonder what future interactions he will have with Yako and how Neuro would act accordingly. Seems like Neuro got a bit annoyed with their interaction during the last chapter( was that a hint of jealousy I caught drift of? ;) ).Update soon!

Just wondering.... did you write any Neuro Yako or any MTNN fanfics before? I would love to read the others as well. I read your previous postings saying that you posted this fanfic here so people won't have to look for parts of it all over a forum ( or something like that).

Also a little sidenote... I really like the fanart that you used for this specific chapter .... "reverse Harem" indeed! I never thought about it that way while reading the manga and watching the anime. I gues it was because the story distracts you with so many delectable mysteries and funny scenes of Yako getting tortured that you never suspect that MTNN is actually a reverse harem! If possible, can you please send me the picture? (the background where yako is surrounded by all the guys) Or atleast tell me where I can find it?


Feel free to email me back at "Anurila@gmail.com"

I'll be checking this site regularly for your updates^^.